Window in the castle


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Title     Window in the castle
Photographer     yagoryo/Eugenio (14,335) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Castle of Toblino
Category     Architecture
Camera     Fuji Finepix S304
Submitted     October 11, 2003 10:03:26 PM CDT
Views     136
Rating     5 Thumb-up

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Thumb-up    from shagie/Michael (153) Send mail to this user on October 11, 2003 10:27:47 PM CDT (3) Early critique

Photographing windows is very difficult. Often (as in this case), you stretch the dynamic range of whatever media is being used (in this case, a digtal camera with about 3 stops of range). As such, the outside is overexposed and possibly a bit washed out, while only a hint of texture. The human eye can capture an impressive range of light and chances are you, the photographer, saw more detail in the forground and din't see a washed out window when you pointed the camera at it.

To capture a greater dynamic range with the digital camera (alas, I cannot find a link to help with this - I know its out there somewhere, I've looked for it before), take three photographs bracketed each by two stops (keeping the f/stop constant). This will give one that is 'kind of ok', one that is 'way over exposed' for the window - but captures the inside, and one that is 'way under exposed' for the inside, but captures the window. Taking these three images and then combining the photographs in photoshop and adjusting the leves of each it is possible to get a much greater range that would show detail inside and outside clearly.

Another approach would be to use a flash with some significant punch to it. This would allow you to lighten up the inside. Even better than a flash (though may be awkward in a castle) would be multiple lights. The idea here is to bring the level of lighting inside the room to a similar level as that outside the window.

Composition wise, there is one thing that catches me - its off center. There's a big dark area on the right and some wood on the left. I do realize that there is a post on the right and it was your desire to capture the post too, however this left it feeling lopsided with nothing to balance the right side.

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From yagoryo/Eugenio (14,335) Send mail to this user on October 11, 2003 10:44:59 PM CDT

Thanks for the criticism and the suggestions, Very true, but in the castle I didn't have the possibility' to use other lights.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from walkaround/Michael (66) Send mail to this user on October 11, 2003 10:17:55 PM CDT (3) Early critique

I like the way you framed this shot! The light versus darkness is well chosen. The chair is a tad dark but overall this is a great shot!

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from jandrade/Jose Paulo (37,683) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on October 11, 2003 10:16:52 PM CDT (3) Early critique

Hi again! This one is very good and inspirational. The idea and composition are very good denoting a good eye for photo opportunities. Although it is very difficult to obtain a good exposition due to the contrasting light I think this one although not perfect is very acceptable. In other words, outside is overexposed and outside a litte underexposed but the result is not very bad to the eye. Jose Paulo

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