Piano


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Title     Piano
Photographer     yagoryo/Eugenio (14,335) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Castle of Toblino
Categories     Architecture
Tourist
Camera     Fuji Finepix S304
Submitted     October 31, 2003 5:06:57 PM CST
Views     167
Rating     7 Thumb-up

Resubmit this photo after having cut aloft the curtain and tried to straighten the perspective. after I have received some suggestions on as to improve the photo. You excuse my bad English (use a translator)

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from icius/Adam (110) Send mail to this user on October 31, 2003 6:24:38 PM CST (1)

Thanks for taking my suggestions and others and reposting. I am flattered. I think this looks much better.

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From yagoryo/Eugenio (14,335) Send mail to this user on October 31, 2003 6:32:35 PM CST

Thanks to you, for your suggestions as to improve, for the one whom the photo has done and always beautiful, but the reality not always and' so, and the suggestions of the other photographers are precious.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from hillbill713/William (175) Send mail to this user on October 31, 2003 5:21:46 PM CST (1) Early critique

I agree that shot may have been better from more to the left. The window trim and piano blend together. Also, just a small comment, pianos should not be placed on an outside wall (especially by a window) because they are more affected by weather and lose the tune. (At least that is true in Northeast US where we get cold winters). Nice simple photo though. I like it.

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From yagoryo/Eugenio (14,335) Send mail to this user on October 31, 2003 5:27:07 PM CST

Thanks William, for the criticism, this piano and' in a castle on a lake in the middle of the Alps, north Italy.

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From hillbill713/William (175) Send mail to this user on October 31, 2003 10:31:17 PM CST

Great area, I lived in Pinerolo in 1987 and 1988. Great country and people. I did some biking and got many pictures.

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From yagoryo/Eugenio (14,335) Send mail to this user on November 1, 2003 7:45:46 AM CST

I live a little anymore a to east, Trento in the Dolomiti

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Thumb-up    from voux/Byron (189) Send mail to this user on October 31, 2003 5:17:03 PM CST (1) Early critique

Q: wat r u trying to show to yr viewers? window? room? piano?

if its e piano, i'd crop it right down to just e piano itself. e top bit (window n wall) n sides (chairs) doesnt help enhance e photo so u might as well get rid of them too.

but then again, it all boils down to wat r u trying to depict....

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From yagoryo/Eugenio (14,335) Send mail to this user on October 31, 2003 5:34:15 PM CST

Thanks Byron, for the criticism and suggestion.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from gabgogh/Gabriel (2,647) Send mail to this user on October 31, 2003 5:12:22 PM CST (1) Early critique

Hey, this not a chair but a piano ;) Nice colours, but I woould have the taken the picture more to the left, so that the composition would even be better than this one. Nevertheless, great brown colouring and (whilst i am a pianist), great picture. Regards, Gabriel, and if you can spare a minute....

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From yagoryo/Eugenio (14,335) Send mail to this user on October 31, 2003 5:15:13 PM CST

Thanks Gabriel, for the criticism, I had mistaken comment..... but I have corrected: -)

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