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from icius/Adam
(110) on October 31, 2003 6:24:38 PM CST (1)
Thanks for taking my suggestions and others and reposting. I am
flattered. I think this looks much better.
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From yagoryo/Eugenio
(14,335) on October 31, 2003 6:32:35 PM
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Thanks to you, for your suggestions as to improve, for the
one whom the photo has done and always beautiful, but the
reality not always and' so, and the suggestions of the other
photographers are precious.
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from hillbill713/William
(175) on October 31, 2003 5:21:46 PM CST (1)
I agree that shot may have been better from more to the left. The
window trim and piano blend together. Also, just a small comment,
pianos should not be placed on an outside wall (especially by a
window) because they are more affected by weather and lose the tune.
(At least that is true in Northeast US where we get cold winters).
Nice simple photo though. I like it.
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From yagoryo/Eugenio
(14,335) on October 31, 2003 5:27:07 PM
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Thanks William, for the criticism, this piano and' in a
castle on a lake in the middle of the Alps, north Italy.
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From hillbill713/William
(175) on October 31, 2003 10:31:17 PM
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Great area, I lived in Pinerolo in 1987 and 1988. Great
country and people. I did some biking and got many pictures.
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from voux/Byron
(189) on October 31, 2003 5:17:03 PM CST (1)
Q: wat r u trying to show to yr viewers? window? room? piano?
if its e piano, i'd crop it right down to just e piano itself. e
top bit (window n wall) n sides (chairs) doesnt help enhance e photo
so u might as well get rid of them too.
but then again, it all boils down to wat r u trying to depict....
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from gabgogh/Gabriel
(2,647) on October 31, 2003 5:12:22 PM CST (1)
Hey, this not a chair but a piano ;) Nice colours, but I woould
have the taken the picture more to the left, so that the composition
would even be better than this one. Nevertheless, great brown
colouring and (whilst i am a pianist), great picture. Regards,
Gabriel, and if you can spare a minute....
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From yagoryo/Eugenio
(14,335) on October 31, 2003 5:15:13 PM
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Thanks Gabriel, for the criticism, I had mistaken
comment..... but I have corrected: -)
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