Meditation


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Title     Meditation
Photographer     yagoryo/Eugenio (14,335) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Particolar
Categories     Decisive Moment
Emotive
Camera     Fuji Finepix S304
Submitted     December 16, 2003 6:20:08 PM CST
Views     194
Rating     9 Thumb-up

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from wmwjas/Waldemar (424) Send mail to this user on February 16, 2004 4:18:10 PM CST (2)

It is the pleasure to find a photo with a perfect architectural copmposition close to my view. If in addition you got the mediation in the window then the positive result is double. Only one element - that cable. Eugenio did you try to "clean" it ? Don't be angry. Sometimes I must to say so much. Regards.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from mariaaanka/Mariana (1,974) Send mail to this user on December 27, 2003 7:38:33 AM CST (3)

hello eugenio, the situation that you captured here is really very interesting and so is the expression of the man. is it unposed? i like it very much. the composition is very good, unusual. i think the picture could be sharper. great job anyway, regards, mariana

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from davidg/David (9,000) Send mail to this user on December 19, 2003 2:46:37 PM CST (3) Early critique

I like this candid capture, but again composition to frame a bit more to include the entire window, but I like the use off space below and to the left. That wire pole distracts, but can really remove it(unless your not against some manipulating)

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from memo/Mehmet (38,244) Send mail to this user on December 17, 2003 5:45:33 PM CST (4) Early critique

hello Eugenio, interesting photo.. it is well composed. it needs some sharpness and saturation. also an interesting subject. thanks for sharing. Regards. <|MehmeT|>

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Thumb-up    from morningfrost/Silvio (22,811) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on December 16, 2003 7:41:43 PM CST (4) Early critique

The idea is fine. First of all, would you mind if I tell you that the wire conduit is something terrible to see? I find hard to look and enjoy your picture with it right in the middle. If you can use a longer focal length, it would give a good picture to simply zoom on the man behind the grate.

This would also let you expose for the man without blowing the wall, it requires at least one half stop more light.

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