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from chungho/Ray
(24,827) on December 31, 2003 8:39:36
AM CST (3)
Eugenio, I understand you try hard to improve this image, but
result is not good though.
Please use the PEN TOOL to crop out the flower, with selection of
pixel in "ZERO", so you can avoid the glow around the flower.
Certainly, take the pic in black color background, applying the
black color cloth or card, this is much helpful.
Try to take the better image in next time. Keep going!
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From yagoryo/Eugenio
(14,335) on December 31, 2003
10:32:38 AM CST
Thanks Dusty, for the precious suggestions, I in PS am an
inexperienced person
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from rvwv/Ray
(11,803) on December 29, 2003 3:40:28
PM CST (5)
Wow talk about a shot that has something all over the board. Like
the photo Eugenio. As for just a photo of the orchid I like the
other better, for emotional appeal this one has a surreal effect.
This looks like something you might see on a card. Nice job.
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from ary/Davide
(363) on December 29, 2003 9:30:33
AM CST (0)
The subject is beautiful but the focus it's not right for me. May
you could take the photo far from flower.
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from jandrade/Jose
Paulo (37,683) on December 29, 2003 9:25:04
AM CST (6)
Ciao! I prefer the original version. I think that you need more
training in the selection of Photoshop. The flower is too complex
for a good selection without training. So, 1 tu meaning "overall
good effort but in need of (lot, I say) improvement. The effect of
the backlight in the dark background does not fit well to my eye.
Jose Paulo
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from mikescot/Mike
(26,435) on December 29, 2003 8:27:54
AM CST (5)
Nice flower nature shot. I like very beautiful flower and
interesting soft image effect. Good colours. Maybe crop can be with
leaf in the right bottom corner of image. Regards, Mike.
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from hansv/Hans
(11,196) on December 29, 2003 5:52:48
AM CST (3)
Sorry Eugenio, I think this was a snapshot that is not very
attractive: - The edges of the flowers are destorted. - The
core of the flowers cannot be seen properly, too much backlight. It
would be way better of also lighted from the front. - You cropped
the leaves at the right. To be honest, the original (which I
just looked at) was not worth more then 1TU for me, you now just
made it worse with too much PS... Try not to overdo it.
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from memo/Mehmet
(38,244) on December 28, 2003 7:25:14
PM CST (7)
woow Eugenio, very successful retouch, great effort. your orchids
really becomes more vivid. black background works well here.
congrats for your first retouch. <|MehmeT|> best wishes..
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from parsifal/Stefano
(106) on December 28, 2003 6:31:40
PM CST (7)
Hello, I task that with the dark background is better than with
the background outside fire, beautiful job of ritocco, you must
learn the PS better, but you go on the good road. Stefano
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from greenjade/Green
(31,115) on December 28, 2003 1:22:35
PM CST (8)
Hi Eugenio! Very nice and sensitive image! I like yoozdr light
and presntation a lot. Also PS work ist almost perfect, maybe the
edges a bit too soft??Nice cropping as well....well done job! Best
regards Green jade! Thanks for your nice comment!!
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from matthewmay/Matthew
(324) on December 28, 2003 12:32:44
PM CST (11)
Great picture, but here come the buts. But this, But that. Really
all well meant, so please do not be offended. You are using PS as as
a knife, not as a scalpel. It might be good not to take it too far:
your fab pic might not need as much softening. It is only my opinion
but I think you have gone for the PS sliders>filters>etc
wuthout thinking what your really cool pic could shout about.
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From yagoryo/Eugenio
(14,335) on December 28, 2003
12:39:43 PM CST
Thanks Matthew for the criticism and the comment, is not
offended me if you tell me that something is not all right,
rather they are the things that I appreciate more for
learning.
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from neoviruz/Neo
(480) on December 28, 2003 12:08:54
PM CST (9)
Big fine work of PS, the black background stands out still much
more the beauty of the flower. It seems almost that the flower have
actual light!
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from kapalua/Thomas
(64,989) on December 28, 2003 12:03:00
PM CST (10)
Great soft focus view of the flower with almost a
transillumintion quality to the petals. While my preference would be
for sharper clarit, what you have crafted works very well. The black
background and the lighting are excellent. 2.5 TU
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from niggmanfred/Manfred
(56,458) on December 28, 2003 11:57:29
AM CST (10)
Hello Eugenio, your second expenditure of the beautiful flower,
which Orchidee has so a soft character, which pleases me very good,
is not thereby the contrast to the background not so hard, which
becomes effective colors here better and the viewer is pleased, it
gives nevertheless approximately thirty thousand kinds and you have
yourself one the most beautiful here presented, excuse my English,
best regards Manfred
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from kienmoser/Gisela
(66,983) on December 28, 2003 11:50:43
AM CST (11)
hello Eugenio, a beautiful motive is this pretty flower, the dark
background forms a good contrast, the bloom becomes effective very
well, I loves these colors composition, good photo work,
congratulates to you... best regards, Gisela
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From sinvidapadre/Phil
(18,026) on December 28, 2003 12:23:12
PM CST
People! are you in mind? It is terrible photo! sloppy job!
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From johntobin/John
(2,529) on December 28, 2003
8:30:41 PM CST
I think you are WAY out-of-line to make a comment like
this. While it may not be a perfect photo.. I think it is FAR
to extreme to call it a "terrible" photo.
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From johntobin/John
(2,529) on December 28, 2003 8:24:09
PM CST
Well...You did make the flowers stand out a little better. Good
try at some PS. (Still needed some fill-flash).
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From ebenammat/Eben
(2,396) on December 29, 2003 7:55:11
PM CST
Butchered by Photoshop. The Club must be blind. Or a bunch of
pathological liars.
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